matthew-ferguson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FrankClock; Poker Hero]

Lol, LOVE!

You do that, halo 3 rocks! w00t! :D

[Bond]

PHIVEN to you sir.

I love Bond films and your animation is half bad for a beginner. I hope to see more of your work in the portal. :D Good job, my 5 are belong to this.

[Ackbar Movie : The Movie]

you sir.. are a fucking god!

ATHF style all the way.. Great flash, you are 5'ed.

[Ye old thanksgivin collab]

Sexy..

Your animations are sexy, as well as the artists. PHIVEN!

[Mario the Emo]

A 10 salute to you, sir.

:D So this is what you have been working on, very nice!!! ^_^

[Pone]

Nice flash

Nice sticks. Love the effects.

[ChronoTriggerLegendsEp5]

ZzZzZz..........

Boring dude... And couldn't of made the sprites larger? I mean some of the graphics were all right.. but what was with those gradients? There didn't fit at all man. Nothing to great here... But the people must have saw something in it.. you got daily first... or that could be because you have a bunch of popular people "co-authoring".

[If Pokemon Were Real]

Not too bad...

GOOD THINGS
1. The comedy was good. The ideas were very funny and ammusing.
2. You drew the pokemon very well. umm.. you did draw them yourself didn't you?
3. The way you made one thing lead to another was great. What I mean is like how you made the T.V turn on and then show Jigglypuff on American Idol.

THINGS THAT COULD OF BEEN BETTER
1. Why in the world did you use that music... For a Si-Fi kinda thing? Well that music is from X-files I believe. So it was kinda weird.
2. Here is a hint. Things don't hop or slide around. And mostly they don't float through the air. You should of tried to animate walking. You would of gotten a much better score if you would have done some walking animation.
3. The lawn mower was kinda weird. I thought it was like a lilttle red cart or something at first. Just make sure that things are clear before you submit.
4. Try using some sound effects for god sake! There are like 30 places were you could of added sound effects.
5. Since when has a mouse pokemon been bigger than a car? Make sure that things are the right size.

Im just trying to help you out here. And if I offended you in any way in this review then please let me know. Im just trying to improve you as an animator. And before you go and try to say that I've never made any movies just know i've made 3.

Well I hope to see future flashes by you and I hope you take some of my advice.

~M~

[Carlos Man of Love]

Hope you read this one.

Well its time for a review!

GOOD THINGS:
1. The song was great. And you gave credit to him as well. Very nice!
2. It was very funny the way you animated it. When he is telling them to "Touch him right there". Just loved it man.
3. Your drawings are very intersting. ( In a good way of course.) When you draw a girl she is very hot. Good one on that.
4. Very nice. With the inbetween my legs you'll find a prize. Wasn't expecting the rose there. Very funny.
5. How you did the whole " Make my Weiner disapear" was great. Nice and clean.

THINGS THAT COULD OF USED IMPROVMENT:
(Before I start this half of the review I would like to say that I know that your animation and creativity has grown a lot since you made this. So bare with me please.)

1. The stage could have been a little bit more decorative. But I guess its fine the way it is because Carlos is supposed to be all you need. That one could go either way.
2. I noticed that the red headed chick that you used when Carlos sang the " Around the world the scream my name..." part was also the background girls just with a different alpha seeting. And she was also used in the "Roll around in the grass.." part.
3. When the man walks in on Carlos making love to his wife/girlfriend it was a bit poorly animated. The door was a bit messy, there was a bit of white left behind, and the man in the door was kindy glitchy as well.
4. The lip synce isn't constant. It was kinda weird.. he was singing but he wasn't. Just trying to be constrictive.
5. The ass at the end was kinda weird looking.... Just a thought.

Well this has been one of my longer reviews but it was for a very deserving peice of art. Just on a side note. I didn't mean for this review to be mean or hatefull in any way. I just wanted to give you some helping advice. If you were insulted by my review then drop me an email or something. Thanks.

5/5
9/10

~M~

[Let's Play Some Mario!]

Nice and in 10 mins....

Lets do this....

GOOD THINGS.
1. The way you had your drawings and your voices was just hillarious. It set the mood for the crazyness!
2. The whole anime joke was just hillarious! "Well Mario is.. umm.." I just loved it dude.
3. The music in the background was nice..
4. The whole thing about the kid not having the mario game was just sweet. Iiiiiiiiiii'm gonna kill you.
5. And the little thing where you put your text was awesome.

THINGS THAT COULD HAVE USED IMPROVMENT
( I know you did this in 10 mins so bare with me)
1. At some points the guy looked like a head on a red stick. Kinda weird but also kinda funny... yeah.
2. It looks like there is a little bit of white around the edges on the replay screen. Nothing to bad.

this flash gets a 5/5! Nice flash dude. FDA approved!

~M~

averageroadkill responds:

wow long review thanks alot dude