matthew-ferguson's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Let's Play Some Mario!]

Nice and in 10 mins....

Lets do this....

GOOD THINGS.
1. The way you had your drawings and your voices was just hillarious. It set the mood for the crazyness!
2. The whole anime joke was just hillarious! "Well Mario is.. umm.." I just loved it dude.
3. The music in the background was nice..
4. The whole thing about the kid not having the mario game was just sweet. Iiiiiiiiiii'm gonna kill you.
5. And the little thing where you put your text was awesome.

THINGS THAT COULD HAVE USED IMPROVMENT
( I know you did this in 10 mins so bare with me)
1. At some points the guy looked like a head on a red stick. Kinda weird but also kinda funny... yeah.
2. It looks like there is a little bit of white around the edges on the replay screen. Nothing to bad.

this flash gets a 5/5! Nice flash dude. FDA approved!

~M~

averageroadkill responds:

wow long review thanks alot dude

[LL - Ddevil]

OMFG!!! YOU PWN;;!!!!!1

OBEY THE LOCKS! You just rule man! AIM me or something! I might become a lock myself! You just rock! Nice song!

~M~

Coffee-lock responds:

Might... just... do... that....

[the adventures of BAGMAN]

Alright dude.

Nice flash but some parts werent lipsynced to well. And your mic skills could use some work.

dretrock responds:

yeah, that was my first actual flash....hey, at least it wasnt some stick man tweened to fly across the screen :)

[The Gumball Machine]

Happy Lock Day!!

Wow. Dude... this rocks!! Happy lock day!! This gets a good review!

GOOD STUFF
1. Lock movies are always cool. And yours are no exception.
2. As always nice animation. I may start making lock animation.
3. The songs kicked ass!! Green Day rules and so does Blink.
4. The gumball machine thing was pretty funny. " Clock Lock we love you... Shut the hell up!" Genuis line man.
5. The phone part was cool. "What the duece?"

Well im kinda tired its been a long day. So ill cut this one short.
One question. When is Sandmans world 2 commin out?
~M~

sandman0277 responds:

Thanks again, as always Matty ^_^
Sandman's World II has no real due date yet, but I am done with voice acting, and animation should be starting soon. ^_^

[The NewGrounds Machine]

The funny thing is....

I was thinking about making a flash exactly like this. I was gonna call it "A Day In the Life of a Flash". But yours kicks ass! Way better than mine would have been.

GOOD THINGS
1. The movie had a very good plot. Its about newgrounds so what could be better!?!
2. Your animation was really good. The flash guy was cool.
3. The music was good. But kinda got old... Its a toss up on good or bad.
4. I like the little sytem you made up as a metaphor for Newgrounds. The whistle part was my favorite.
5. I like how you made the voting thing like a pinball thingy.

BAD THIINGS
1. Even though it had nice animation and a good concept. But some parts got kinda boring. Like while waiting for the pinball thingy to get to the Blam or Protect spot. Try to build supense like if you would have made "attacks" for different levels voting on the flash.

OVERAL
This was a very good flash. It should have gotten like daily firts place but its pretty cool getting fourth.

YOU HAVE BEEN REVIEWED BY: ~M~

SwEecH responds:

Ok, man, I love getting long and constructive reviews like this one so thank you for having taken the time.
When I made this movie, I was not expecting this little 'succes' (award, frontpage and 100k views) so I have been very pleased with it. I think the good points like the plot and a few original ideas (the flash guy in the ball, whistle level, blam/protect mecanism...) saved it, because when I watch it again now i find it good but too slow, which can easily lead to a boring movie (although it seems it was not the case of this flash). Hopefully I'm still improving and my flash skills are getting better.
I'm working on different projects right now but I work a lot for my studies and I don't have much time. I should come up with one or two nice submissions in a couple of month.
cya.
SwEecH